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simple scene of the night

i'm excited in working with vectors, i'm beginner

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:iconwedgatabo:
Hi!

This is a very nice work for someone who is new with vector art!

The effect on the water really draws the viewer into the scene.

I think it would help if you could add some small ripple lines where the rocks and boat meet the water. Another alternative could be to illustrate the submerged parts of the boat and rocks with a faint transparency. This way they will appear to be IN the water as opposed to sitting on top.

-C

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All HAIL the magickal cheese.
:icons0lem:
Thanks for critiques

I go to try to modify the drawing and to try to improve

thanks too for critiques in my "Simples Logo - AFC Contest…

I deleted and placed they with other ideas that I had, with some modifications.

If to want to see [link]
:iconwedgatabo:
no problem! i'm very impressed with your design ideas, they're so clean and attractive :)

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All HAIL the magickal cheese.
:icondebymp:
nossa! ficou muito bonito!
parabéns! :)

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"It is God who arms me with strength
and makes my way perfect"

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:icons0lem:
obrigado, to começando, mais acho que to evoluindo um poquin =P

=)
:icondebymp:
:aww:

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"It is God who arms me with strength
and makes my way perfect"

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:iconatsil:
perfecto!

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It's so nice to see very talented people like you guys!
:icondunbie:
Very nice and atmospheric... In opposite to wedgatabo, I think that this picture has own magical emotion right due to lack of such details as ripples and perfect mirroring are. When you'll try to add there realistic perfection, the magic will dissappear... It became only good nighty drawing. The magic is in its minimalism, altough, as you wrote, you're only learning how to work with vectors, and maybe this unique magic was not your intention. I encourage you to build your own style for expressing what you feel...

However - very impressive! I can imagine such illustrations in some nice book.

:-)
:iconyingfong:
I like the night sky and the stars. (: They glow beautifully.

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“If your dream is alive, then one day it will come true.” - SeoHyun, SNSD

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